Saturday, 11 October 2014

On The Beach

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Happiness on the beach for Mr.Bakshi!
He ogled at a pretty lady in a bikini sexy!
mario miranda mug
Photo-Prompt- The Moving Quill

Mrs.Bakshi, who was wet, was wild seeing this.
Hubby staring at another woman is no bliss...

Their little boy was unaware of any tension!
For him, on the beach meant happiness & fun!

(49 Words)


Linking this to the Fiction Challenge ‘From 15 to 50′

So happy that this has been adjudged amongst the top five & as the Winner Post HERE! Thanks Shailaja!

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39 comments:

  1. Loove it, Anita. Last line was what happiness is all about:)

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    1. Thanks Vishal :)
      Happiness is the absence of tension or what we dislike :)

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  2. Haha this was humorous in the way it was presented :) But it's really a common story..unfortunately!

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    1. Thanks for stopping by.
      Yes, this is true & happens everywhere!
      I remember seeing a pic in the newspaper of the world leaders- Obama & Sarkozy staring at a lady in a World-Meet!

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  3. Happiness is relative, as they say ;)
    Nice try, Anita!

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    1. Thanks Beloo :)
      Yes, it depends on the perspective!
      Happiness like riches is relative!
      The more the happiness or the riches, the more the relatives :)

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  4. A nice story describing happiness as it changes with perspective. Good one, Anita.
    Cheers!

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    1. Thanks Kiran!
      Happiness for one, isn't happiness for another :)

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  5. That was lovelyyyyyy! Enjoyed it! :-)

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    1. Thanks Shilpa. Delighted that your enjoyed reading this :)

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  6. My father (RIP) was always faithful to my mother, but he did tend to have roving eyeballs. I once told her I would smack any man who did that! In the long run, that would have been mild. My (now ex) husband was emotionally abusive.

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    1. Thanks for sharing your experience, Ursula.
      Yes, men do have roving eyes... This habit can hurt their wives mentally & emotionally, especially if they are sensitive...

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  7. So funny! So true in the case of most of the families... It's a cute mug which you have showed us :)
    TC! Keep smiling :)

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    1. True Sindhu.
      Even I love the cup. It's Shailaja's picture prompt :)
      Keep smiling :)

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  8. This is so adorable! I love the multiple perspectives you brought in, in just 50 words! Well done :D

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation & for choosing me as the winner for the October edition of #15to50, Shailaja :)
      Delighted with my maiden win :)

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    1. Thanks for stopping by :)
      Glad you liked it!

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  10. Wow! Anita, :):D Very nice! Poor Mr. Bakshi:)

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  11. What an apt warning you put Anita....ROFL....:)

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  12. Anita, it's short, crispy & profound. It reminds me of Jesus' quote: "I tell you the truth, unless you change and become like little children, you will never enter the kingdom of heaven."

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  13. Haha ..that's a cool one Anita, and the story is pretty realistic. ;)

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  14. Well done Anita! I don't feel sorry for Mr Bakshi at all as I think he was behaving really badly. Poor Mrs. Bakshi.

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  15. O God ! Poor Mr Bakshi !! Nice one Anita :)

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  16. Hahaha, this was amusing Anita, god bless the little boy - may he always be happy like this!

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  17. Hilarious it is! :-D So beautifully presented!

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  18. ha ha ha ... Good one ..

    http://thetalesofatraveler.com/2015/08/08/day-trip-from-bangalore-to-kotilingeshwara-temple/

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  19. Hehe..we often meet men like Mr Bakshi on the beach... :-D

    The last line is what happiness is all about.... :-)

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  20. very nice... the last line perfectly describes happiness.. :-)

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  21. hahaha this was fun to read!

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