Thursday, 28 August 2014

My Starry Sky

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They accused & taunted me,
They killed me every moment…
Yet I was alive as I lived in fantasy,
Offering my two cents' worth to torment.

WILD LIFE
PHOTO PROMPT – Copyright – Madison Woods
That day when they crossed every limit,
I decided to leave their world unfair…
I followed my own compass with grit,
Till I reached a place beyond compare…

Starry Night by Alex Ruiz

Twinkling stars & heavens in my sight!
Having always aimed for the stars,
The artist in me squealed in delight!
My colors are free without bars...

As I gazed at the starry-sky,
Overwhelmed & thankful,
I knew my dreams would fly…
My canvas will be beautiful.



Linking it to Magpie Tales #234 
& Two Shoes Tuesday- Leave
& Friday Fictioneers
& Write Tribe

62 comments:

  1. OH I am sure it will be ... one day it will be for sure .. BEAUTIFUL


    Bikram's

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    1. Amen!
      Wish it's the same for all :)
      Best wishes to you too for a beautiful canvas of life, Bikram!

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  2. What an uplifting verse about finding your own place in life and leaving behind that which isn't good! We can all strive for the life we dream of, we don't have to settle for that which cripples our souls. Thank you for sharing with us at Two Shoes Tuesday!

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    1. Thanks Josie for your beautiful words & for the opportunity to share :)

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  3. I dreamt ..........

    Brilliant. :-)

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    1. When we dream & achieve, it truly is brilliant :)

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  4. A beautiful canvas indeed......beautiful writing Anita!

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    1. Thanks Carrie for your beautiful words :)

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  5. Lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
    Mary-andering Creatively

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    1. Thanks Mary :) Delighted that you liked it :)

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  6. I loved it because I was able to relate to it. Sometimes we need not pay attention to what others have to say and go about doing our work. But at the same time, we should know when to move on. Wonderfully written :-)

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    1. Thanks for sharing your wise words & your appreciation, Ashwini.
      I agree with you.
      We all have faced such situations and need to move on & prove ourselves & fulfill dreams :)

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  7. Beautifully warm, inspiring and igniting hope in the heart:)

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    1. Thanks Vishal for your lovely words :)

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  8. Beautiful Poem Anita. Loved the 2nd stanza.

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    1. Thanks Vidhya! So glad! Thanks for sharing :)

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  9. I think your canvas already is. Nice Mag! Love and Light, S

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    1. Thanks a lot :) Glad you liked it.

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  10. No doubt it would be beautiful
    You are getting better one post at a time :)

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    1. Thanks Red :)
      Thanks to your love & encouragement :)

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  11. ohh how beautiful!! maybe you reach those stars :)

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    1. Thanks Rajlakshmi for your appreciation & wonderful wish :)

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  12. YOUR POEM CONVEYS SUCH A POSITIVE MESSAGE ABOUT COURAGE AND SELF ESTEEM. A LOVELY POEM, NO DOUBT!

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    1. Thanks a lot, Uppalji :)
      Yes, the message is to have the courage to walk out of negative atmosphere & discover a new world where we are free to pursue our dreams...

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  13. Beautiful canvas beautiful words...

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    1. Welcome to my Blog, Tess.
      Thanks for your beautiful words :)

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  14. I always flounder at poetry :D but look at you flawless!

    Richa

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    1. Thanks Richa. You are too kind :)
      Have to go a long way to be flawless...

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  15. Loved the flow of the poem :) well done Anita !

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    1. Thanks a lot, Uma :)
      Glad you liked it.

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  16. nice take on the prompt. i love the positive spin on it.

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    1. Welcome to my Blog, Plaridel :)
      I love positivity too!
      Lovely to hear from you.

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  17. It's like a dream...what a weave...! Beautiful will be an understatement...

    Random Thoughts Naba - My Two Cents’ Worth on a Friday Night…...

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    1. Thanks for your beautiful words, Naba :)

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  18. To go into such delight - what bliss

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    1. True Bjorn! May we all be blessed to be full of bliss!

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    1. Such bliss we don't wish to miss!

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  20. And hopefully all the paint is free! :-)

    janet

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    1. Colours of imagination are free :)
      For reals paints & canvas, we need to pay, Janet :) Else Sponsors needed!

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  21. This is truly lovely. Alicia

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    1. Thanks for stopping by, Alicia.
      Lovely to hear from you :)

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  22. The natural world around us is a great inspiration in all forms of art. Yet some cannot see it with their eyes opened. Hopefully when we see such beauty around us it may see that in us too.

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    1. Yes indeed. We all are works of art too. God's most intelligent creation...
      Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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  23. Anita, Lovely piece and beautiful picture to accompany it. : ) ---Susan

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    1. Thanks a lot, Susan :)
      The pretty starry picture is courtesy the prompt.

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    1. Thanks Ann for stopping by & reading :)

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  25. Dear Anita, Wonderful job! I think I will stop reading these because it is so late - and your story is so marvelous! Can't do any better than yours! Nan :)

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    1. Thanks for such marvellous words, Nan:)
      Means a lot to me.

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  26. Loved the flow of the poem, Anita! I just love how you are able to weave multiple aspects into a single creation. :-)

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    1. Thanks a lot, Uma :)
      Delighted that you liked it!

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  27. Sometimes it is important to cut the drama and follow your own path ....beautiful soul-sis:)

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  28. Beautifully crafted poem Anita. Keep it up!

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  29. Warm and positive! Loved it, Anita:)

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  30. Beautiful piece Anita. Reflecting hope and positivity. :)

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  31. From darkness to light, from depression to boom, from dejection to elation...so much upliftment of the soul in these beautiful verses!

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  32. A beautifully weaved one! Loved every bit of it :) Kudos!

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