Sunday, 17 August 2014

Reunion



He loved her & even she was his lover.
Their love was scorned by those in power.

No union as in their stars there was fault.
They were killed, but their love wouldn’t halt.
COPYRIGHT: Shailaja V/ The Moving Quill
COPYRIGHT: Shailaja V/ The Moving Quill
He was the butterfly, she was the flower.
Reunion, at long last, at that dawn hour…


Linking this to the Fiction Challenge ‘From 15 to 50′


40 comments:

  1. Lovely! A lot said in few words, Anita :)

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  2. Dear Anita,

    Such a wealth of emotions you've captured! I especially like the conclusion, filled with sadness and pathos.

    Thanks for linking up:)

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    1. Thanks Shailaja for the initiative. My pleasure to link up :)

      That they were killed is sad. But, I felt the ending is happy as the lovers had a reunion.

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  3. Divine justice. You've injected a right does of emotions, love and longing. Pure bliss:)

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    1. Glad you liked it, Vishal. Thanks for your nice words :)

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  4. Sad and romantic. I enjoyed your poem.

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    1. Welcome to my Blog, Cathy! Thanks a lot :)

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  5. :( .. few words lots of emotions :)

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  6. Nice Anita....your perception about this prompt made me amazed.

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    1. Thanks Arpita. You can contribute for it too. Do link up :)

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  7. Lot of emotions in few lines..:)...

    Feel free to comment on my blogs too

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    1. Thanks for stopping by & sharing, Abhishek. Do keep visiting :)
      I did :) You have a cool Blog. Keep Blogging!

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  8. Emotions captured? And how?!!! Wow, Anita! :)

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    1. At least they are together after death :)

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  10. Poem filled with emotions.... Lovely one Anita...:)

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    1. Happy ending as they united, Bikram...

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  12. Touching poem Anita... You make us melt... Nice photo too :) TC! Keep smiling :)

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    1. Thanks Sindhu :)
      The photo is courtesy Shailaja- it's her picture prompt.
      Keep Smiling :)

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  13. Really beautiful...
    Heartfelt words :)

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    1. Thanks a lot :)
      Delighted to hear from you.

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  14. Lovely response to the prompt :)

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  15. Eternal Love. Love your idea for the prompt Anita.

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    1. Yes, that was my idea- Love after death & Eternal Love... Thanks Vidhya!

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  16. 'Mar b jaayen pyaar waaley, mit b jaayen yaar waaley, zinda rehti hai unki Mohabattein :)' Wonderful Anita :)

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    1. Thanks for sharing the line of the song from the Hindi movie- Mohabbatein! Very apt :)

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  17. Sob...sob...you've done it so well Anita...i fell like letting the tears fall...
    Love the pic by Shailaja too...has that feel of unwanted, uncalled for destruction...

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    1. Thanks Shivani. But, please don't cry. Your words mean a lot :)
      Yes, Shailaja's pic is open for interpretation- I like to think of a happy butterfly on the way to a flower :)

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    1. Thanks for stopping by, Sagar! Welcome here!
      Glad you liked it :)

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  19. Superbly written...very touching.......

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