Thursday, 25 December 2014

She Walked That Path

She had visited many lands & had travelled to the world’s edge.
She had lost a lot & had quit material objects in pursuit of knowledge.

The brilliant light of enlightenment was her joy, desire, aim & plan.
People warned- “Don’t even try walking that path! You’re a woman!”
PHOTO PROMPT - Copyright -Björn Rudberg
PHOTO PROMPT – Copyright -Björn Rudberg

She still climbed up the stairs & followed her lofty dreams fervently.
She devotedly conquered the insurmountable & attained her aim ultimately.

When she walked down the same path as a winner, the same people recognized her.
Today, people follow her footsteps, are thoughtful listening to her attentively & feel better…

100 Words Story-Poem :
Friday Fictioneers
Three Word Wednesday- Brilliant, Fervent, Thoughtful


  1. short , sweet and thought provking.

  2. People always stop people from doing what they didn't have the guts to do. brilliant

  3. A trail blazer to emulate obviously. Nicely Anita!


  4. Loved this Anita.. good one! using the steps as climbing up success is very nice.

  5. Lots of emotion in a short poem. Nice job.

  6. An inspiring poem Anita :) Every woman faces similar obstacles but only a few dare to swim against the stream. When they succeed they become inspiration for all just as this sweet poem... :)

    TC! Keep smiling :)

  7. Brilliant and inspiring. Such emotional journeys of believing in the self brings out not only the best but makes victory tasty as the same world revisit their copy.

  8. Dear Anita,

    This was brilliant, fervent and thoughtful.

    Shalom and Happy New Year,


  9. I can relate to many things in the poem. Very beautiful.

  10. If anyone told me I couldn't do something because I'm a woman, I'd work harder too!

  11. excellent ,the world need such fearless women

    He Is Coming to Town

  12. People always want to hold you back until you succeed, and then they all want to bask in your glow.


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