Thursday, 6 November 2014

She Danced



She danced wonderfully as she danced from her heart.

She rehearsed sincerely & that set her apart...

She earned praise, medals, awards & many a trophy.

All this was also accompanied by cartloads of envy.


Though they taunted her, a bright future she did chart!


45 Words Poem

Linking it to-
Two Shoes Tuesday #103 - Dance

Five Sentence Fiction - Envy



26 comments:

  1. Great Lines, Dance which is called a way to say something to a people. Great Work, Thanks for sharing this.

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    1. Thanks for stopping by & reading & for your nice words :)

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  2. Interesting rhyme scheme! Like a limerick (although it's not).

    Always good to have another poet participate in FSF challenges.

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    1. Thanks a lot for visiting & sharing your valuable comment.
      I have used the rhyming-scheme of Limerick. Need to read about it in greater detail :)

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  3. nice one! envy is always earned :D

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    1. Thanks! Wish we could sell/exchange envy :)

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  4. Nice - hard work and achievement brings, results - but also brings envy.
    Cheers
    KT

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    1. Thanks for stopping by. Yes, that's the truth...

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  5. Excellent! Success always creates envy among others unknowingly.

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    1. That's unfortunate, but true :)
      Thanks for reading & for your appreciation :)

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  6. Nice !
    M sure people envy you as you post for several prompts in one ;)

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    1. That's sweet, Anmol! Thanks :)
      More than the envy, nice to earn good wishes :)
      Best wishes!

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    1. Thanks a lot :) Glad you liked it, Ramya

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    1. Delighted you liked it, Vinitha :)

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  9. Some people have that attitude dominating than the rest of the good qualities that they have... but what will that do to your dancer, she relies on her hardwork, na?? Good one, anita!

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    1. True. Nice that the dancer depends on her own hard-work.
      Thanks Priya :)

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  10. I love this Anita, we can see that your dancer reaped the rewards of her dedication and hard practice. I love that she danced from her heart, anything done from the heart is bound to be rewarding, and yes, there will always be those who envy. This is because they admire achievement but are unwilling to put in the effort themselves. Great poem, I loved it!

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    1. Delighted that you liked it! Thanks for sharing your wonderful words & appreciation, Josie :)

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  11. Brilliant fiction. A tale of triumph and perseverance. The heart never lies as beautifully penned, Anita:)

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    1. Thanks Vishal!
      Am sure this is reality too for some people...

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation, Daneshwari :)

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