Sunday, 6 April 2014

The Unexpected Trap


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WOW- Trapped!

The actress looked stunning in that red costume and heavy make-up.

The movie shoot was on. 
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She tried to focus on her lines.

The director tried to retain his patience as she fumbled causing many retakes…

Everyone was also worried why the producer hadn’t arrived at the sets.

Only she knew that the producer would never arrive.

She had killed him last night when he had tried to force upon her…

But, she was shocked when there was an unexpected visitor.

It was the producer!

It was a trap.

Actually, the Police-Inspector had worn a mask with the producer’s face…



This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

This time we’re aiming at making it more creative! Your post must contain, ‘ It was a trap!’


This post is also for - Write Tribe's 100words on Saturday 2014 # 10 – an unexpected visitor

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This is a fiction for Friday Fictioneers - 4 April 2014.

28 comments:

  1. Now that was unexpected! Indeed!

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  2. Dear Anita,

    Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. I think her acting days are over.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thanks Rochelle :) This was the 2nd time I contributed to Friday Fictioneers.

      She must have told the police that the producer was at fault!
      Maybe they'd let her out as she had killed out of self-defence... :)

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  3. Wow! That's thrilling Anita and a suspense woven in a crisp manner. Superb:)

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    1. Thanks Vishal for your kind words. Glad you liked :)

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    1. Thanks Soumya :) Delighted that you liked the Kahaani mein Twist! :)

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  5. Good story. She must have gone to pieces when she thought he came back from the dead. She should have called the police and reported the death right away. At least that's what I've heard in some murder mysteries. She needs a good lawyer. Well written.

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    1. Thanks! Welcome to my Blog :)
      The Police must have zeroed in on her or on someone from the cast/crew. That's why they dropped in at the movie's shoot!
      She may not have reported out of fear or may be out of confidence that she'll be saved.
      Yes, now she needs a good lawyer & good friends like you & me! :)

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  6. She would have told the truth out of fear....won't find any way out of the trap

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    1. True. Now she'll have to present a strong case. Hope truth wins!

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  7. Aha, twist and double twist.
    Welcome to FF

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    1. Thanks for stopping by! Welcome to my Blog! :)

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  8. Reminded me of Bollywood movies of the 70s and 80s :d

    Nice :)

    Updated my blog. Do drop by.

    Cheers
    CRD
    http://scriptedinsanity.blogspot.in/2014/04/in-your-mothers-arms.html

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    1. Thanks for visiting my Blog!
      Even I love Bollywood! :)
      I checked out your latest cool post!

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  9. That would be shock if you knew you'd killed someone and then thought he was back from the dead. I imagine it wasn't too hard to get her to confess.

    janet

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    1. Very true, Janet. But, she would have earned sympathy as she was protecting herself & had no intention to kill...
      Welcome to my Blog!

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    1. Yes, Ankur! Tale with a twist!!!

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  11. Haha ! Looks like a good plot for thriller :-)

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    1. Thank you so much :) Can be a thriller movie with a strong past & whodunnit mystery thrown in :)

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  12. I love your imagination and story telling style! Simply fantastic!

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    1. Thanks for your nice words, Ratna :) Work as medicinal boost!!!

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  13. Anita this is a lovely twist !Great idea.

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    1. Thanks Ushaji :) Glad you liked the twist & the idea :)

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