Friday, 7 March 2014

Yours Sincerely...



I wrote about them honestly, truly freely & frankly;

They lost all their senses & chided me furiously…

They said, “If you have nothing better to say, don’t say!”

I said, “But, you know that’s the truth & you only said ‘Satyameva Jayate*-

What happened to all your high ideals & the previous ‘acting’ display?” 


*Satyameva Jayate-  Truth always wins

This is a 55 Fiction, 5-Sentences Poem for Lillie Mc.Ferrin Five Sentence Fiction - Furious & Write Tribe Festival Of Words- Day 6- 55 Fiction

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42 comments:

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    1. Thanks for visiting my Blog! Welcome :)

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  2. Very thoughtful 55 fiction.

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    1. Thanks Rajlakshmi! same to you :)

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  3. Speaking truth isn't always easy :)

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    1. True! Recipients have to accept!

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    1. Thanks for stopping by, Sugandha :) Glad you liked it!

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  5. Actions and words don't match these days, eth?

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    1. True Sir. Actions speak louder than words:)

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  6. The picture is so apt for the words!

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    1. Mridula, the Pic is given along with the prompt 'Furious' by Lillie Mc. Ferrin :)

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    1. These days it is suppressed... Hope it triumphs always!

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  8. Nice post Anita. The image also good ... Ruffled feathers!

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    1. Thanks Kokila! Written for two prompts & the pic was given by them :)

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  9. Wah! Wah! ... This reminds me of one of my old rambling… here it goes.

    वो जो उतार देना चाहते हैं कविताओं मं अपने व्यक्तिगत दुःख
    हस्पताल मैं भर्ती हो जायें और डाक्टर को अपने दुःख सुनायें
    कविताएँ दर्द निवारक गोलियां नहीं
    किन्तु वो बन कक्ति हैं गोलियां जो दागी जायें उनपर
    जो कष्ट कई कारण हुआ करते हैं

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    1. Thanks Sachin!
      Lovely that you have shared your thought-provoking thought lines here! :)

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  10. Funny as well as immensely meaningful.

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  11. Oh this was awesome! I so love the way you play with words so effortlessly! I so wish I could do that! :)

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    1. Thanks Soumya! Blessed that one word-champ & effortless player of words shared these words for me :)

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  12. The truth can be tough to swallow! Thoughtful!

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    1. Right! But, can't understand why people so swear by truth & then act this way when it is out!!! :)

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  13. Very nice poem!Satyamev Jayate...

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    1. Thanks Amrita! Glad you liked it!

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    1. Thanks, but it's more of a reality than a comedy :)

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  15. Truth always wins. Rightly said! wonderful poem indeed :)

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    1. Truth wins...but it wins us enemies too, Bhavya! Very tough! :)

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  16. Awesome post Anita :)
    The pic though funny shows the situation faced when we speak out some bitter truth :)

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    1. Thanks! Yes, the bitter truth hurts even the people who claim they are truth-supporters!

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  17. Beautifully said, Anita:) This is the plight of society and they don't wanna hear the truth:)

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    1. Thanks Vishal. Yes, it is true & that's the truth! :)

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  18. Good one! And the photo rightly reflects it!

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    1. Thanks Sindhu! Yes, the photo given by Lillie Mc.Ferrin is so apt! :)

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  19. Uh oh! Now who did you annoy with your post? ;) Good take and lovely picture!

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  20. Thought provoking indeed :)

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