Monday, 19 January 2015

Proper



When he went away wordlessly,
she wondered that morning earnestly-
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Why did he ignore?
No word/kiss at the door?
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Photo Prompt- Permission from Magpie Tales

She wished things were proper,
Wives deserve their husbands’ best-behavior!
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He came! Imagine her surprise!
His wordless kiss was nice!



Linking with-
Two Shoes Tuesday- Proper 
Magpie Tales
dVerse Poets- 10 words

25 comments:

  1. Omg, such a sweet post, Anita :)

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    1. Thanks Aayesha :) Glad you liked it!

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  2. aww that is so sweet :) beautiful write

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    1. Thanks for reading & for your appreciation, Rajlakshmi :)

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  3. :) love is in the airrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :) very romantic

    Bikram's

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    1. Yes, Bikram! The pic gets the credit :)
      V Day is less than a month away :)

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  4. like the romantic atmosphere which you could create effortlessly!

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    1. Thanks for your nice words, Uppalji :)

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  5. heh. me thinks he was setting up the surprise of coming home early...

    and even though you missed the link at dverse,
    i bet if you visit some of the others they will find yours....

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    1. Nice when we have nice surprises, Brian! :)

      Thanks for the tip :)

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  6. He was off to buy the ring ! ....( for the other girl)

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  7. Sometimes ladies jump to conclusions that can so unnecessarily torture them. Perfect writing.

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  8. very sweet- she should have been a bit more patient!

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  9. How romantic! How sweet! We all love to be loved and surprised right?

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  10. This was lovely! I like that he returned to kiss her. We need to take time to show the people we love that we are thinking of them and they are important to us. Love needs to be nurtured if I is to say "proper" and strong! :-)

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  11. Such a sweet verse! :)
    Enjoyed reading it :)

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  12. By God i can identify with this...has happened so many times...beautiful Anita. Really so well composed and explains so much. God Bless :) :) :)

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  13. There is no such thing as proper...

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  14. lovely little take on the pic prompt!

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  15. Sounds like a new bride speaking. Like the happy ending.

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