Wednesday 18 May 2022

The Missing Girl

Taani was missing.

Her family had last seen her in her own room.

They were sure that Taani had not gone out of their home.


Taani was working very hard on her college-assignment.

She had not slept the night before.

All she wanted was to complete her work and then take a break.

She saw the photograph of herself enjoying in the pool.

It was quite hot.

Taani felt refreshed looking at the pool-photograph.


Detective Rizi was trying to figure out where had Taani disappeared? 

Her eyes were drawn to the pool-photograph.

Why did it look so inviting?

100 words story for Friday Fictioneers.

What do you think happened to Taani? Could Detective Rizi solve the case?


  1. Did she dive straight into the picture? Or perhaps decided to go for a swim without telling anyone!

  2. Oh dear where has she gone.

  3. May be she went for a long walk

  4. Sounds like a couple of Twilight Zone episodes. In one a little girl and her dog went into her bedroom wall, and in another two children dove to the bottom of their pool and ended up in another, happier home.

  5. Rizi will be the next to disappear..

  6. Intriguing. Next stop, the pool Rizi.

  7. I want one of these picture portals. Imagine, stepping from your office into the pool... But there ought to be a backdoor. Great take.

  8. Working too hard on college assignments can be dangerous. I hope she can swim back into reality in time to submit it after all that hard work.

  9. I think he joined her in the pool, and they fell in love and lived happily ever after :)

  10. Dear Anita,

    Intriguing story. Perhaps she climbed out the window.




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