Sunday, 6 July 2014

At Home


The four friends hugged together. 

“We’ll succeed in our mission for our home, won’t we?”

 “There's a place in Heaven for us, isn’t it?”
 

On D-day, they set out on a rampage.
Those terrorists killed many in the city. 

Three of them were killed, while the police caught the fourth.

“Who do you work for? Open your mouth, won’t you?” 

The terrorist was given the death sentence. 

After he was hanged, he awoke to be reunited with his friends!

It does feel like home, doesn’t it? 

It was Hell…

It was too late to ask- "God hates terrorism, doesn’t He?"
 
 

My Story for Write Tribe- 100 Words on Saturday- Question Tags

44 comments:

  1. Nice words to express a social issue

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    1. Thanks Huma :) Welcome to my Blog.

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  2. You expressed everything in just few words :)
    Amazing :)

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    1. Glad you liked it, Karanvir :) Thanks!

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  3. Yeah. I guess he would have felt at home with his friends, even if it was in heaven.

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    1. True, Leo :)
      Anyway, they were in 'Hell' before & hence were in search of 'Heaven'.
      But, the fact is while they expected to gain an entry to Heaven, they actually got Hell as God hates terrorism...

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  4. Most unusual, Anita and very strong message too.

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  5. you sent a wonderful message through your story.

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  6. Your message comes out stronger because of the smart use of questions tags. Very well structured.

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  7. You have chosen a dark topic and it's different from the takes that I've normally read on it. Way to go, Anita!

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    1. Glad you liked it, Aathira :)

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  8. You chose a very interesting topic to write on, enjoyed reading it.

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    1. Delighted that you enjoyed reading it, Sulekkha :)

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  9. An important message nicely delivered....loved reading it

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    1. Thank you so much for reading & for the appreciation :)

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  10. nicely worded .. enjoyed reading it !

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    1. Thanks Ankur :) Great that you liked it!

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  11. You are an awesome writer Anita! The quotes you are using make a lot of difference! Keep writing! TC! keep smiling :)

    BTW, I haven't noticed your posts in Indiblogger since many days... Sorry, I couldn't pay a visit directly...

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    1. Thanks a lot, Sindhu! Always nice to hear from you :)

      Haven't posted any for the past week as have been tied up & no time to Vote/Comment - that I think I must if I post to IB... I can post to IB, but then when I get the votes, I'll feel guilty if I don't Vote back! Will do when I have time on hand :)

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  12. I cant understand which religion teaches that killing a innocent will take them to heaven ..

    very well expressed ..


    Bikram

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    1. Thanks Bikram!
      Yes, can never comprehend why all this mindless killing. No God/Religion advocates this...

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  13. if only they knew. They r soo brainwashed by many to believe that their path was right.

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    1. True Red.
      When will everyone start thinking rationally? Realize that every Religion upholds peace & love?

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  14. nice post! such delusional people go to hell for sure but after torturing hundreds of innocents...

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    1. True Ankita. How can they even do all this?...

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  15. Gosh! What twisted minds! Very different take on the prompt, Anita! :)

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    1. Indeed Shilpa. Wish there was no hatred & killing & only love & peace...
      Thanks!

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  16. Really a good one. Light words on a powerful issue.. well expressed Anita

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    1. Thanks Meera :) Glad you liked it :)

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  17. A very unusual take on the prompt...Good one :-).

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    1. Thanks Jayanta! Delighted that you liked it :)

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  18. Interesting take.. Liked the quotes too! :)

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    1. Thanks for stopping by, Payal & for sharing your comment :)

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  19. A powerful message sent and one that touched us deep inside.
    That's a cute one. U refreshed childhood memories:)
    Do check mine http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/07/11/write-tribe-100-words-on-saturday-17/

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    1. Thanks Vishal for your nice words :)

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  20. Well-penned with a useful message.Awesome.


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    1. Thanks for reading & for the appreciation, Rudra :)

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