Wednesday, 12 February 2014

Ache


In an arranged marriage, two young souls were attached. 

Everyone said the Gods in Heaven had planned & matched!

The couple had disagreements, fought & separated from one another.

As miles separated them, they realized it was no fun alone as together.

The heart-ache was actually love that was now free & no longer latched…

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This is my 55-Words Post for Five Sentence Fiction - Lillie Mc Ferrin 

14 comments:

  1. Wow.. :) Always a lovely thing to read in your blog! Love how you go on creating wonderful poems!

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    1. Thanks Preeti :) Love your kind words :) They are the inspiration to write more & better :)

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  2. Catchy little poem/story! Is it from a prompt?

    This is my first time here. Found you off the #wwwblogs on Twitter.

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    1. Thanks Tui for stopping by :) Welcome to my own space.
      Yes, the word given was 'Ache, Hope I did justice to the prompt!
      Twitter rocks as does #wwwblogs :) Do visit often!

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  3. Amazing how even with limitation you nailed the brief. Beautifully written !!

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    1. Thanks Garima :) Glad it appealed to you :)

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    1. You have a great imagination :) Thanks for reading & sharing! :)

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  5. Woooaaahhhh! Wonderful take :)

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  6. Hi,
    I stumbled across your blog and really enjoyed your blogs. I am an author (2 novels published) in search of identity and would feel privileged to get reviewed by you.
    I will be happy to send a copy to you (soft copy or hard copy. Whichever you feel convenient enough). Let me know if you are interested.
    I’d love to hear back from you. You may contact me at ravirenus@gmail.com

    Best Regards,
    Ravi Kumar R
    http://ravirenus.blogspot.in/

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    1. Thankyou so much Ravi for your kind words. It is my privilege to be considered by you :) Best wishes :)

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