In an arranged marriage, two young souls were attached.
Everyone said the Gods in Heaven had planned & matched!
The couple had disagreements, fought & separated from one another.
As miles separated them, they realized it was no fun alone as together.
The heart-ache was actually love that was now free & no longer latched…
This is my 55-Words Post for Five Sentence Fiction - Lillie Mc Ferrin
Wow.. :) Always a lovely thing to read in your blog! Love how you go on creating wonderful poems!
ReplyDeleteThanks Preeti :) Love your kind words :) They are the inspiration to write more & better :)
DeleteCatchy little poem/story! Is it from a prompt?
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Thanks Tui for stopping by :) Welcome to my own space.
DeleteYes, the word given was 'Ache, Hope I did justice to the prompt!
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Amazing how even with limitation you nailed the brief. Beautifully written !!
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Thanks Garima :) Glad it appealed to you :)
DeleteIt was like a movie :)
ReplyDeleteYou have a great imagination :) Thanks for reading & sharing! :)
Deleteahhh splendid!
ReplyDeleteThanks Red :)
DeleteWoooaaahhhh! Wonderful take :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Soumya :) Glad :)
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ReplyDeleteI stumbled across your blog and really enjoyed your blogs. I am an author (2 novels published) in search of identity and would feel privileged to get reviewed by you.
I will be happy to send a copy to you (soft copy or hard copy. Whichever you feel convenient enough). Let me know if you are interested.
I’d love to hear back from you. You may contact me at ravirenus@gmail.com
Best Regards,
Ravi Kumar R
http://ravirenus.blogspot.in/
Thankyou so much Ravi for your kind words. It is my privilege to be considered by you :) Best wishes :)
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