Wednesday 12 February 2014

Ache


In an arranged marriage, two young souls were attached. 

Everyone said the Gods in Heaven had planned & matched!

The couple had disagreements, fought & separated from one another.

As miles separated them, they realized it was no fun alone as together.

The heart-ache was actually love that was now free & no longer latched…

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This is my 55-Words Post for Five Sentence Fiction - Lillie Mc Ferrin 

13 comments:

  1. Wow.. :) Always a lovely thing to read in your blog! Love how you go on creating wonderful poems!

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    1. Thanks Preeti :) Love your kind words :) They are the inspiration to write more & better :)

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  2. Catchy little poem/story! Is it from a prompt?

    This is my first time here. Found you off the #wwwblogs on Twitter.

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    1. Thanks Tui for stopping by :) Welcome to my own space.
      Yes, the word given was 'Ache, Hope I did justice to the prompt!
      Twitter rocks as does #wwwblogs :) Do visit often!

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  3. Amazing how even with limitation you nailed the brief. Beautifully written !!

    http://www.sweetsharing.com/honey-saved-house/

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    1. You have a great imagination :) Thanks for reading & sharing! :)

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  5. Woooaaahhhh! Wonderful take :)

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  6. Thankyou so much Ravi for your kind words. It is my privilege to be considered by you :) Best wishes :)

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Your words mean a lot to me.

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