Wednesday 1 December 2021

The Right Track

The yellow envelope was top secret.

She was proud to be the chosen one.

The task was of national importance.

She tried to crack the given map and the code as she set out to accomplish the mission.

She saw the yellow arrow atop the snowy mountain.

She was confident that she was on the right track.

She immediately messaged the location details.

Reaching the house clandestinely, she documented the corrupt politician’s multi-million deal with the most-wanted terrorist.

Their security nabbed her!

The sounds of the helicopter and police-van assured her that her team had found the right track too.

100 Words Story for Friday Fictioneers

Do you wonder if you are on the right track? 


  1. That sounds like a film in the making....

  2. This is a great tale, well done, Anita.

  3. Sounds like she's good at her job.

  4. National importance, eh? That would make me think twice before taking on a mission. I hope your protagonist is prepared to be the pawn in a hostage situation.

  5. Dear Anita,

    Good that she found she was on the right tack. Not always easy to know.



  6. Esxcellent tension here, and we're still wondering if she was rescued from the culprits in time :)

  7. I'm curiously skeptical about this. They send her to find something or someone with a big yellow sign pointing the way, and then she hears a van and choppers? Is she delusional? Perhaps the yellow envelope contained release papers from a mental hospital. :-)

  8. The corrupt politician and the multi million deal sounds so true.


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