Sunday 2 March 2014

Winsome Threesome!


The Doctor had pronounced me dead and God’s angels took me away from my home to Heaven where I found three important ladies- my Mother, my Granny & my Grandma, who were happy & sad to see me there.

After the happy hugs, they were upset as on the giant screen we could see the live telecast of what was happening in my home on Planet Earth right then- that my Papa, siblings, hubby, kid and other near and dear were inconsolable…

When God came to see me, my Mom started questioning Him- “Why did you invite my kid here so soon and do you have any idea- how will my grandchild, son-in-law, husband & kids live without her?”

Even I questioned God, “How will Planet Earth have any niceness & goodness left if you take away all the nice & good people, like my Mom & my grandmothers… and now me?!”

God was still thinking of a suitable answer when the three angelic ladies demanded Him to gift me another life on Planet Earth as my life was essential for so many lives…

They were God’s favorite angels and God agreed to their request!


Just before I departed Heaven, my Granny, who had left us a month ago, let me into the secret of her key, “Convey to your Uncles that my Locker’s key is in the secret compartment of the Silver Filigree Konark Temple in my Showcase.”

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While bidding me goodbye, my Mother & my Grandma were very concerned about their respective husbands and asked me to take care of their health…

Just then, the Doctor’s face lit up as he announced, “It’s a miracle- She’s back from the dead!”


This is my Post for the IndiSpireTopic-2-#BackFromTheDead, Write Tribe - The Wednesday Prompt 2014 #8 & Write Tribe - Festival Of Words: 9-Sentence Fiction.



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60 comments:

  1. Sreeja Praveen2 March 2014 at 18:41

    Aaha ! A very very imaginative piece, Anita. Happy that she could come back. Happier that she knew all the lovely ladies in her life are happy in heaven :) Loved the way the ladies were concerned about their hubbies on earth :) :) Women are like that, aren't we !

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    1. Anita Sabat2 March 2014 at 20:24

      Thanks Sreeja :) Delighted that you liked it!
      Yes, High-5! We women are always so concerned! And the three women I have mentioned were the epitome of caring & sharing. I know they are my Guardian Angels now.

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  2. Corinne Rodrigues2 March 2014 at 19:16

    So glad she came back to Earth! The older ladies did a good job of arm-twisting the Big Man, eh? ;)
    PS: I like the way you combined all three prompts, Anita.

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    1. Anita Sabat2 March 2014 at 20:28

      Thank you so much, Corinne! Means a lot :)
      Yes, that's why the Teen Deviyan are the 'Winsome Threesome!'
      Even God listens to them! :)

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  3. BloggerWlogger2 March 2014 at 20:25

    Wow.. So good to know she came back again! :) Great post! :)

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    1. Anita Sabat2 March 2014 at 20:29

      Thanks Preeti! She owes her life to the Teen Deviyan & God, of course :)
      Glad you liked it!

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  4. Jayashree Srivatsan2 March 2014 at 20:35

    Good one. Back from the dead with riches ? :)

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    1. Anita Sabat2 March 2014 at 21:57

      Thanks for stopping by, Jaish :) Riches with my Granny's locker's key whereabouts...Sure to make my Uncles rich! :)

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  5. Dr Roshan Radhakrishnan2 March 2014 at 21:02

    wonderful... i love how you blended all the prompts together :D

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    1. Anita Sabat2 March 2014 at 22:29

      Thanks a lot, Roshan :) Delighted you liked liked :)

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  6. Prasanna Rao2 March 2014 at 21:36

    Thank God you came back otherwise we would have missed your awesome Bollywood posts. :) Indeed the Teen Deviyan are the winsome threesome :)

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    1. Anita Sabat2 March 2014 at 22:34

      Awww! Such a cute message! Thank you, Prasanna
      Yes, Bollywood Posts coming up! Thanks for the motivation! : :)

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  7. Sindhu Devi K2 March 2014 at 21:37

    If it is really possible!!! Great imagination power you have!

    Regards,
    Sindhu
    Tantu
    The Arts & Me

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    1. Anita Sabat2 March 2014 at 22:35

      Thanks Sindhu! Great imagination like you ::)

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  8. RioZee2 March 2014 at 21:42

    Very nice twist. Really back from the dead.

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    1. Anita Sabat2 March 2014 at 22:37

      Thanks a lot, Rio :) Coming back from the dead has to be a twist! :)

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  9. Pooja Mahimkar2 March 2014 at 22:15

    You had me at the Big Screen :D

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 11:38

      Big Screens in the Heaven! Dunno if it's for real! :)

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  10. Saket2 March 2014 at 22:35

    It was all your mother and grandmothers' work, and the doctor got the credit!

    Writing on multiple prompts must be very challenging and would require great imagination, I believe. You handled it well!

    And your deep affection for the three ladies in your life shows up!


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    1. Anita Sabat2 March 2014 at 23:06

      True Saket! Good observation. Happens so many times.
      Some people hope & pray while others give us their blessings that saves us. Prayers & Blessings can save us!

      Multiple prompts are indeed challenging. But, sometimes when there's no time, they are the best option. Also, totally worthy to attempt them for such nice comments! :)

      Thank you. God took away the nice ladies of my life to Heaven... Tough to live without them...

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  11. Maniparna3 March 2014 at 01:18

    Aha ! that's so very imaginative :-D.. and you've nicely blended all the prompts ! I like that filigree work of Konark temple too.. :-)

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 11:39

      Thanks a lot Maniparna :) I love your words! :)

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  12. Jyotsna Bhatia3 March 2014 at 01:59

    That is some serious creativity Anita.. linking so many prompts.. Amazing :)

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 11:41

      Thanks Jyotsna :) Nice to live up to challenging prompts & earn great feedback! Delighted :)

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  13. Beloo Mehra3 March 2014 at 08:58

    Welcome back to the earth! Hope you find it a little better this time around ;)

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 11:42

      Yes indeed! Earth is nice owing to nice people like us! Thanks for making it special :)

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  14. Indrani3 March 2014 at 09:18

    That was done on purpose by God to carry back messages to earth. :D
    Very well written.

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 11:43

      That's an excellent point, Indrani! God has His own plans.
      We think we have won! But, it's God's victory! :)
      Thank you for sharing this insight! :)

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  15. Swarnambal John3 March 2014 at 10:27

    Such an interesting piece of writing! Great!

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 11:44

      Thank you for the appreciation, Swarnam :) Glad you liked it!

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  16. Rakhi3 March 2014 at 10:27

    I just read ..and I loved your writing Anita, quite touching at different levels. I just subscribed myself to your blog. :)
    Lovely writing !!!

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 11:46

      Thanks Rakhi for reading & for subscribing to my Blog :) I feel so blessed! :)

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  17. Shailaja V3 March 2014 at 11:02

    The bliss of coming back from the dead. I am guessing she felt incredibly happy. Nice one!

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 11:48

      Yes Shailaja! Happiness for everyone when the lady of the house is back from the dead!
      Imagine what would have happened next when she gave all the messages about the key & health-concerns! :)

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  18. Amrita Sabat3 March 2014 at 11:33

    Wow...what a superb post! Back to life from the dead! Even I wrote abt God sending me back...albeit due to my quick thinking in front of God!:)
    We are So positive ppl! :-P

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 11:51

      Yes! I read your creative post! It's cool thinking & positive attitude that can win over anyone- even God!
      Nice to be back on Planet Earth that too living in our own body!
      (When I watched the Hindi movie, Jhuk Gaya Aasmaan, I was sure that I never want to live in another person's body, if I am ever sent back from Heaven!)

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  19. Seeta3 March 2014 at 11:37

    Truly creative! and yes that is women power at its best I guess :)

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 11:52

      Thanks Seeta! Yes, more power to women! Women Power rocks! :)
      International Women's Day is round the corner!

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  20. Preethi Venugopala3 March 2014 at 12:48

    God is also scared of women power :P
    You gave me hope... I too have three awesome ladies up there..just in case...:D
    Loved reading it Anita...

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 13:24

      Oh Preethi! We have so many things in common... We have their best wishes as our awesome Guardian Angels are forever watching over us & protecting us! :)

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  21. Sangeeta3 March 2014 at 13:11

    Oh that's quite a smart and creative post, Anita! I am sure your guardian angels would be happy with it, too :)

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 13:27

      Thanks Sangeeta :) Yes, they were forever encouraging and loved my writings!
      You are right! They must be reading and must be happy :)

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  22. Anonymous3 March 2014 at 13:51

    That's one with a different take but enjoyable, Anita:) I believe in angels despite being agnostic.

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 17:55

      Thanks Vishal :) I believe in angels too. Mine are these Teen Deviyan up there in Heaven watching over me :)

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  23. Rohan Kachalia3 March 2014 at 13:54

    That was a nice post! glad that she came back to earth..

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  24. Soumya3 March 2014 at 14:42

    Woohoo I kept reading expecting a breeze of bollywood to hit me! But this was more better! :)

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 17:57

      Great to know, Soumya :) Thought of putting Bollywood too, but constrained by the number of sentences- 9! Decided to concentrate on my story :)

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  25. Richa Singh3 March 2014 at 19:12

    Did you combine the two prompts? Gooood! And it turned out to be a rather smart narrative..

    Richa

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 21:42

      Thanks Richa for your appreciation :) Delighted that you liked it!

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  26. indu chhibber3 March 2014 at 21:21

    Well well just like your header says-miracles do happen!A refreshingly different story Anita.I enjoyed reading it.

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    1. Anita Sabat3 March 2014 at 21:43

      Thanks Induji :) Glad you enjoyed it!
      Yes, Miracles do happen!

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  27. பாà®°்கவ் கேசவன் 4 March 2014 at 00:34

    Very nice Anita :)

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    1. Anita Sabat4 March 2014 at 01:30

      Thank you for stopping by & taking time out to share your view! Do visit often! Delighted you liked it!

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  28. Anonymous4 March 2014 at 13:08

    That's seriously awesome, you made a great post by correlating the prompts!

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    1. Anita Sabat5 March 2014 at 09:36

      Welcome to my Blog! Thanks a lot for sharing. Actually, by combining the prompts, we get constrained....
      I could do justice only to the hashtag- #BackFromTheDead and not the other guidelines in this IndiSpire idea as I had to stick to 9 sentences as per the other prompt. Perhaps had I not taken up the latter one here, I could have expressed another tearful drama...
      You have done an excellent job with the prompt! Kudos!

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    2. Anonymous5 March 2014 at 14:23

      Thanks a lot :)

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    3. Anita Sabat5 March 2014 at 16:23

      Keep it up! :)

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  29. Anonymous8 March 2014 at 14:44

    Wow! That's amazing how you managed to combine so many prompts...great story! :)

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    1. Anita Sabat9 March 2014 at 16:13

      Thank you so much :) Delighted you liked it!

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