Ronya admired herself in her beachwear.
It fit her well, accentuating her curves.
Each morning, Ronya ran on the beach.
Having lost weight, she could finally wear her old beach clothes.
She felt lighter, and she ran faster.
PHOTO PROMPT © Jennifer Pendergast
A crown and sword lay in her path- as though the sea had gifted them to her!
She also saw a brand-new cellphone.
Ronya looked around.
No one was in sight.
Just then, that cellphone rang!
Ronya was surprised to see her photograph set in the phone!
Puzzled, she picked it up and answered it…
Someone had been documenting her weight-loss journey.
100 Words Story. Linking with the Friday Fictioneers.
What do you think happened next?
Should Ronya have answered the phone?
What do you feel?
That sounds rather creepy to me. A great story 👍
ReplyDeleteStalker alert.
ReplyDeleteI don't like sound of that. Nice take though!
ReplyDeleteNot sure whether the stalking or the sword unnerves me more. I hope she doesn't look up to see the stalker approaching. If she does, outrun the creep!
ReplyDeleteScary - always being watched! 😬
ReplyDeleteWell that is uncomfortably spooky!
ReplyDeleteI am sure they were trying to be helpful and giving her credit for her effort. Otherwise it is a bit odd.
ReplyDeleteAnon, James.
ReplyDeleteDear Anita,
ReplyDeleteHow uncomfortable for her.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Hmm, interesting... what next?
ReplyDeleteCreepy! Well written.
ReplyDeletebe forewarned, stalker on the loose
ReplyDeleteIs this innocent or dark? I could read it both ways. I'm assuming it's innocent so let's wish them all happiness.
ReplyDelete